Thursday, September 30, 2010

War Poem

[[This is another poem I wrote in High School (circa March 2009) in the same class as "Yellow." The assignment for this one was to have a war poem. That was all the description said, so I wrote this. I'm not sure if it really reflects how I feel, but my teacher said it was the most powerful of our poem project and she didn't have any editing tips!]]


War Poem
Gripe and complain, gripe and complain;
You're all hypocrites.
You cry for peace and even make signs,
Draping yourselves with symbols of love
Claiming to live what you preach.
You're all hypocrites.
.
You gripe and complain at the news on
Your way to buy toy soldiers. Your children
Watch you to learn, but how can they while
You also promote them to play with
Tanks and battleships?
.
You love your children, as well you should, yet
You praise their sketches and pictures of war.
You tell them to play and hand them a gun. What's
That? It only shoots water, you say? Then
You turn to your spouse and gripe and complain
About a far away desert. You say they want to
Come home and they hate the heat, but
Your son plays the same game in
Your own backyard.
.
Instead of your tangible figures, you now buy
An animated army--slaves to your controller.
The scene becomes more graphic, but
You only think to get a higher score. You never question
The principle of the game, however
You gripe and complain when actual
Decisions of war are made.
.
Gripe and complain, gripe and complain;
You're all hypocrites.
You cry for peace and even make signs,
Draping yourselves with symbols of love
Claiming to live what you preach.
If you're going to gripe, then don't play the game;
If you play the game, then don't complain.

1 comment:

  1. The periods are to mark the different stanzas. For some reason when I just pushed "enter" it wouldn't register when I posted it.

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